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Friday Flash 55 [ Repeat Echo
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Flash 55 & Poetry Jam
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A double submission today. On Poetry Jam we had 3 photos to choose from as our prompt. I chose the one below. I decided to pen my 55 today as well ~ so it's a two-for-one. Backstory inspiration is below, as always.


For 6 weeks during the months spanning March and April, our community just shook its hanging head as a collective. No less than 10 young people lost their lives in that short period ~ 6 in car accidents, 3 to suicide and 1 to a drug overdose. While I was saddened by all the deaths, it was one in particular that hit too close to home. I run in the same tennis circle as the mom whose daughter lost her addiction battle. As a result, I've seen, heard and shared the grief of she and her family. It was a blunt Facebook post reading, "something I never expected to have to do: cancel cell phone service for my dead daughter" that hit me square between the eyes. I read with empathy and compassion her writings every day. She has lifted me up, in spite of her own grief, to be a "warrior" with my own children. I had no idea that when I chose this photograph I would pen such sadness; I can only imagine what those repeating echos must sound like. Peace be with you, warrior mother and your fallen angel.

26 comments to chew on:
Sobering ... a reminder of just how quickly lives can reverse. Fifty five words ~ you used them perfectly.
ugh...that bury child will echo for a while...a parents worst nightmare...
nice rhymes though...
Wow, that is intense.
Amazing how a photo can bring in so many unexpected things.
And yet she goes on, and in reaching out with those words, she opened the door for others to be there for her in her grief.
Karis...
FRIDAY Flash 55!!!
You post earlier than Brian. Grrrrr
Hard Hitting 55...
Life goes on, but for the Mom...?
How utterly unthinkable.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
Perish the thought of losing a child. I just can't imagine. Glad you posted early. Gives me a chance to comment before getting on with my day.
Loss of a child- wow- the closest I have come is 2 young nephews from the same family, dying about a year apart- I helped care for them when they were very young. Thanks for posting and visiting!
Wow. This poem is a real curve ball - I think I see it coming down the middle and then it takes me to another place and yet another. Wonderful!
I cannot even imagine this pain. Warrior mother for sure! Thank you for sharing this.
I can't even imagine collecting my sons forgotten bicycle from the college square. The images - how she even kept moving, yes, a warrior.
Every parents worst nightmare. Great 55.
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No parent should have to bury a child.
A fitting tribute to her bravery in coping with the repeating daymare.
My biggest fear of becoming a mother was that I'd outlive my son. Powerful 55.
This broke my heart. And yet it's so true that those who suffer the most have such immense power to lift us up. I have beem lifted up by a mother who has had to bury a daughter.
Emotionally effective (without becoming bathetic) piece.
Wow - your straight-forward, sparse verse gives this such power.
Oh so chilly.
Wow!
Sometimes it's the very small detail that delivers the stunning punch. Your sobriety allowed you to experience it, and your skill allowed you to put words to it.
Heartfelt!!!
The FB status just shook me. I could feel my left hand over my forehead in disdain!
Very thoughtful of you to have composed this one..
So sad when young lives are lost. A nicely written 55.her
Yes the 'bury child' line hits hard. Powerful stuff.
We always say "Life is short" but we never mean it like this. A sobering 55.
Powerful and intelligent. Very well-used 55 words.
Very sad indeed. I know of a person in Al-Anon who lost a child to heroin overdose. Her Facebook page is still up. Reading her last posts were terrible.
Just wow.
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